REACHING OUT INTO THE WORLD

Reaching out into the world
I encounter what will touch me

Venturing out onto the plain
I weather what will weather me
and I welcome all that comes to me.

Fathoming my inmost depths
I sound out what speaks to me

My presence will be felt–
I will be in good company–
and the words my secret soul has heard
will have whispered where they would
and spoken well
helped me to see
just who I am
and where I’m from
and what I will become
and that I’m free.

I accept. Thank you Jingle, for the award, and Ravenblack for nominating me.:-)

AS I ACCEPT,

Another month spans out its clouds
another week,
another set of days to break
purple clouds cloak the horizon’s glow
rimmed by sun’s paling edge
of orange and pink–

a bridge gets built
as port crane lights
prevent the falling night
from blinding ships
in deep blue darkness
as long as their amber glows
or red eyes wink.

I nominate haikudoyou.

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24 Responses to REACHING OUT INTO THE WORLD

  1. Jingle says:

    yeah, reach out, touch others and get moved as well.

    love the upbeat spirits and uplifting confidence in it,
    Thanks for joining poets rally.
    Happy Rally.

  2. A very wonderful poem. Well done!

  3. I like this: “the words my secret soul has heard.” I think I know exactly what you mean. Beautiful writing!

  4. A great poem – thanks for sharing it 😉

  5. Ina says:

    I love this poem for the positive energy it gives 🙂

  6. Ravenblack says:

    Reaching out in order to discover yourself. Very interesting. 🙂

  7. jennifaye says:

    a liberating, empowering poem indeed 🙂

  8. Cherlyn says:

    I lovvveed this! Super uplifting, as well exceptionally well written. What a great poem! Thank you for sharing!

  9. Thank you, Aaron, Charles, Caledonia Poems, Ina, Ravenblack, Jennifaye, and Cherlyn,
    for reading and commenting so positively on my poem.

  10. bluebee says:

    I really enjoyed this poem, Elaine – “I weather what will weather me” – living with courage brings the lows and the highs, and this is infinitely better than hiding away, trying to stay safe 🙂

  11. jennifaye says:

    Writing is a way of reaching out to the world. You did it beautifully with this piece.

  12. magher1 says:

    Sounds like you’ve found your inner harmony 🙂 I love the peacefulness and flow of this one!

  13. kez says:

    lovely empowering yet powerful beautifully done ….thank you

  14. “I weather what will weather me.” What a great line – sort of like putting your face to the wind and forging ahead! I really like this poem – the whole sentiment, rather, meaning behind it. I so appreciate your coming to my site for a visit! Feel free to come back any time!

    • Thank you, Paula. It is good to hear what stands out for you. It was my pleasure to read your poem, and I look forward to finding more good work where that one came from (you and your site).

  15. Baishali says:

    hey loved your poem 🙂 …. a very beautiful piece and thanks.

  16. caridwen says:

    I love these lines:
    “Venturing out onto the plain
    I weather what will weather me
    and I welcome all that comes to me.”

    Walt Whitman would have liked these lines, too. Lovely.

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